WALT: Use a range of different poetic devices in our poetry writing.
Stanza 1:
Roses are red, they turn white when they are dead
They don’t get fed but they do get watered on the head
We use roses for our dinner date
Get rejected and face your one and only fate
If you don’t then that's unlucky mate.
Stanza 2:
Daisies grow crazy, don’t cut it if you’re lazy
Because if you do they’d just grow new babies.
They are yellow and white maybe it could give you a fright
But it's alright because they don’t bite
just pick one up and put it to flight.
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Daisies grow crazy, don’t cut it if you’re lazy
Because if you do they’d just grow new babies.
They are yellow and white maybe it could give you a fright
But it's alright because they don’t bite
just pick one up and put it to flight.
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Malo lelei Peliasi.I really like how you explained what a roses and daisies are,its simple but enough information for me to understand.Was this poem very easy to make our hard? let me know right away.I too have a poem but not in the feeling of posting it so stay alert it's coming out soon.Thank you :)
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ReplyDeleteFakalofa Peliasi I really like how you explained the rose it was very funny and amazing to read also the daisey bit was also explained well. The information you used about the plants were very explicit and what was the hardest bit of making the poem?.
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